#2 2008-09-06 22:48:12
At the Palms Motel, no less. How sweet. By the way, Orangie, you should drop that possessive 'S' in "Dad's". I just finished re-reading "Eats, Shoots, and Leaves" and I'm on a bit of tear right now.
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#3 2008-09-06 22:58:46
Taint wrote:
At the Palms Motel, no less. How sweet. By the way, Orangie, you should drop that possessive 'S' in "Dad's". I just finished re-reading "Eats, Shoots, and Leaves" and I'm on a bit of tear right now.
Hokay, have it your way. Next time you spot a "very" anywhere in your own prose, replace it with "fucking". Then delete the fucking. Newswriting 101.
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#4 2008-09-07 08:55:48
My fuckin dad never did a thing for me. Never once did he help me get laid-he even fucked up my chances a time or two.
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#5 2008-09-07 10:06:07
Taint wrote:
I just finished re-reading "Eats, Shoots, and Leaves" and I'm on a bit of tear right now.
I fucking loved that book. She advocated armed struggle in the coming Apostrophe Wars.
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